Jenny’s Sprint to Freedom

Photo by Stephen Baum

Photo by Stephen Baum

Photo Prompt from Rochelle Wisoff-Fields – Addicted to Purple

Jenny muttered a prayer as she ran for her life. Only her footfalls echoing against the tunnel floor interrupted the blessed silence.

Following orders and listening well proved to be her salvation yielding privileges and the secrets to the tunnel underneath the prison. By the time, they discovered her empty cell; she’d be crossing the border.

She could almost hear the guard’s denials of involvement. No one believed her claims of innocence, least of all, her two tormentors; time the assholes got a taste of their own medicine.

Jenny sprinted toward the sliver of light and to freedom.

Do You Have a Weak Plot?

 

Photo courtesy of Google & writeonsisters.com

Photo courtesy of Google & writeonsisters.com

I’m in the midst of trying to complete a rough draft of my novel, Hello Hell. Some 40,000 words in, I decided to change the timeline, which also requires additional changes to some of the characters and the setting. Don’t you just love the hairbrain ideas that come to us in the middle of the night? It is a daunting task already, but I’m also trying as I go, to examine the structure of my story.  David Villalva over at Story & Craft has a wonderful post out today discussing plot and high stakes. “A weak plot propels them to check out,” he says and offers an excellent and simple Stakes formula: If protagonist does not achieve the story goal, negative outcomes will occur.

Want more information and a free download of his Storytelling blueprint, check out David’s site.

Make Memories With a Safe and Happy July 4th

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My500 Word challenge.

I’m taking a break this weekend, unplugging my computer and spending the next couple of days with my family and friends.

Holidays were meant for relaxation and making memories. So, to all of you, I send you wishes of a safe and happy 4th!. Close the laptops, remember all who fought and served to give us the freedom we celebrate.

See you back on Monday!

 

“Freedom has its life in the hearts,

The actions, the spirit of men-

And so, it must be daily earned and refreshed

Else, like a flower cut from its life-giving roots,

It will wither and die.”

     Dwight D Eisenhower

Fried Chicken and Sweet Tea Memories to Savor

Day 14

Day 14

Day 14 of the My 500 Words Challenge. “Tell us about food: what you ate today, your perfect meal, your favorite seasonal foods.”

In the south, where I grew up, everything we ate would be considered comfort food rather than healthy. My mom cooked three meals a day and always had a homemade pie or cake for dessert.  But let me tell you, once in a while I’ll catch a whiff of something and I’m transported back in time. My mouth waters as I remember waking up to the aroma of mom’s biscuits and gravy on cold school mornings. Add a fresh slice of cantaloupe and I went to school with a smile on my face. To think of sweet melon draped in a cloak of salty, spicy warmth is a memory worth savoring. Cantaloupe to this day remains a favorite fruit of mine, although now it’s paired with fat-free cottage cheese instead gray. What a shame.

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I don’t eat fried foods anymore, save one, fried chicken and not just any fried chicken. I want the southern style with a golden crunchy, crispy crust on the outside seasoned with just the right amount of salt, pepper and spices and a  moist center. Man oh man, the Colonel had it right, it is “finger licking good.”

Certain foods evoke strong memories for me to this day. If asked for a last meal request, it would be the same meal I grew up eating every Sunday at my grandmas. I’d want to go out tasting fried chicken, fried okra, cornbread, fresh tomatoes, corn, and cantaloupe. And whatever you do,  don’t forget my southern gold, sweet tea.  I can go without food before I’d give up my tea. And yes, I put a lemon slice in every glass. I like my tea, sweet, tart and ice-cold.01b5ec4f47e4c1aaa5739da9cf0422c4

And no, I’m not overweight (see my profile). But I know a good, satisfying meal when I see one and you have to hand it to us southerners, we know how to cook (ok, most know how to cook). I admit it, cooking isn’t one of my strong points.  I tried for years to reproduce mom’s melt in your mouth biscuits and all I accomplished for my efforts was creating a white powdery missile I could throw at my husband.4be6f09dda2f804812fd98e2d8bce89c

I’d watch her mix a batch nearly every night for dinner, and let me tell you her method was a work of art. She never measured anything, threw the ingredients together in a stainless steel bowl and her hands worked magic. Her biscuits put Hardee’s to shame. Mom had the knack for cooking and baking and I never found it.

Indulging in my favorite foods isn’t as fun as it used to be. Somewhere between twenty and now, my taste buds quit budding, my appetite waned, and my gut started screaming. I’m more health conscious now and am pretty much a 60f0aa5bcb15c667d216722a97fdd266fish, chicken and vegetable kind of woman, but once in a while the smell of fluffy white biscuits call my name. When it does, get out of my way.

I’d love to hear your comments. Talk to me. Tell me your story. And as always, you can follow me on Facebook at SheilaMGood and  Twitter @cofcmom.