Five Sentence Fiction – Breakfast
Be forewarned, my dark twist is back today.
He slammed the refrigerator door closed, rifled through the pantry, then came into view, dipping his fingers into an open jar of peanut butter.
“I can fix you breakfast,” she said, the tremor in her voice unmistakable.
He licked his fingers and ran a sticky hand up her thigh, “Nah, haven’t you heard, PB is like the breakfast of champions; I’m good.
She trembled, feeling the rope cut into her hands as she turned her face from the stench of her own fear, sweat, and peanut butter.
As he brushed, an errant curl from her face with the gun and murmured to her, she closed eyes and prayed.
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loved it!!! 🙂
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That was a dark twist alright.. Well done.
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Liked it. Well thought.
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Thank you, glad you liked it. I always appreciate comments. Thanks for stopping by the Cow Pasture.
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That’s an extremely tense scene with seductive undertones. I really liked it. x
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Thank you. I’m glad you liked it and I appreciate you stopping by to comment.
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Dark twist indeed.
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:-). I’m glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
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Great twist! This one has the makings of something memorable. What happened before and what comes next? Hmm, I wonder.
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Damned if I know. Hehe. Glad you liked it.
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Oooh – great twist. First three sentences leads to a sexy conclusion. Then you introduce the ropes, the gun…
Well done.
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Thanks! I must confess, there is a bit of darkness within and I love putting it out there. I appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment.
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Scary story!
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