Five Sentence Fiction: This week’s word: ABANDON
What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one-word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word.
Barbara stood shivering from the cold night air and stared at the small light glowing in the fire station’s window. She hesitated, what if they didn’t hear her ring?
Tears spilled down her cheeks as she moved toward the door, hugging the blanket tight against her chest. With trembling hands, she pinned the note to the front of the tiny bundle, snuggled the bag of meager necessities against him, rang the bell, then slipped into the darkness.
“Dear son, I love you and please know, I did not abandon you, but from a place of love chose to give you a better life.”
Forever your mom,
Barbara
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That must have been heart-wrenching a thing to do. You have conveyed the emotions very well.
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Thanks. I tried to convey her struggle. I’m glad you could feel it. I’m thrilled you have joined the Cow Pasture hence jumpers and I look forward to hearing from you. Welcome.
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So sad. You did a lot with just a few sentences.
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Thank you so much, I’m glad you liked it and thrilled you stopped by the Cow Pasture. I love hearing from new people. Hope to hear from you more in the future.
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Count on it. 🙂
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I can feel your character’s heart aching
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Thank you. I wanted the emotions to come through. Thanks for stopping by.
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