gstatic imagesSweet Cheeks
He leaned in, face contorted in anger, “You crazy, spoiled ass bitch,” sprinkling the table in spit, “If you think I’m gonna let you drain me dry, you better think again.”
Her brow perked in amusement, “You don’t have anything to say about it, Sweet cheeks,” glancing at his butt, “That is what she called you, right?”
He stepped back in a huff, pushing his hand through his hair, “I told you it didn’t mean anything, and I’m offering you a good settlement. Take the damn thing and let’s get this over and done.”
She turned, brushing her hand through the air as if shooing away an annoying fly, “Not interested, I’ll take my chances with the Judge, Sweet Cheeks.”
Lillie McFerrin Writes, ‘Five Sentence Fiction –This week’s word: OFFERING
What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one-word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word.
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That’s right, no settlements
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Thank you for your comments. I’m so happy you enjoyed the story and thank you for stopping by the Cow Pasture. I love hearing from people.
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Loved the fact that she didn’t wither during his onslaught and stood for what she wanted :).
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My kind if woman. :-). So glad you enjoyef it and stopped by the Cow Pasture. I love getting comments and look forward to reading more of your.
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Loved the pace of the narration!
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Thanks so much. I’m happy you enjoyed it. Snd thanks for stopping by the Cow Pasture. I love getting feedback and look forward to hearing from you again.
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Definitely, will do. 🙂
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Don’t get mad, get even.
Loved it, use of the nickname Sweet Cheeks was very clever.
Cheers
KT
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Thank you, I so glad you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it and thanks for the feedback. Love it when I hear from you guys.
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Hey,
Congratulations and many thanks for becoming a fellow fence jumper. I hope you will enjoy the Cow Pasture. You’ll be privy to a lot of mischief from the Pasture. 🙂
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I liked the ending it was well done.
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Thank you. I appreciate the positive feedback. I’m thrilled you took the time to visit the Cow Pasture and look forward to more conversation.
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I am glad she is standing up for herself. Love your story! Very well done, in such small space!
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Thanks so much for your kind comments. I love getting feedback. So glad you stopped by the Cow Pasture. I look forward to more conversations.
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You do have a way with words. LOL I enjoyed the playfulness of this piece.
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Glad you liked it. I had fun with this one.
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A real soap opera this is! I can see their large faces filling the TV screen with emotion.
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Thank you so much! I’m so happy you enjoyed it. I had fun writing this little scene. I love getting feedback. Thanks so much.
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The way you linked the sentences with dialogue…you come close to cheating.
And grammatically,
“Stepping back in a huff, and pushing his hand through his hair, he said, ‘I told you…’”
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I didn’t want to use dialogue tags. “You can’t speak action” and i thought it was clear who was speaking (him or her). It may have been better to use at least one tag but it was fun experimenting. I hope you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting. I love getting feedback. Until next time….😀
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I like her, she’s sassy. Sounds like old Sweet Cheeks needs to be taken to the cleaners! 😉
http://peppersfetch.blogspot.com/2015/01/story-synopsis-offering-pa-ro.html
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So glad you liked the story. I had gun wriying this one. Thanks for commenting.
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