100 Word Challenge for grown ups – Week #159. The prompt this week: …I need to remember…
The young woman leaned in, “I’m so happy to meet you Mrs. Ridge,” she said, wrapping her soft, elegant hands around mine.
A light, floral scent followed her every move, reminding me of someone. Anxiety niggled at the back of my mind. I searched her lovely face for a hint. “My pleasure dear.” …I need to remember. “What was your name, again?”
She pulled her chair closer. “Most my friends call me Taffy.”
“How cute, nickname?”
“Yeah, since high school.”
“Did I know your mother?”
“Yes, very well,” she said, voice cracking. “Shall I tell you about her?”
Delicately-handled description of the feelings involved between a young woman and her mother suffering from memory loss as described by the mother struggling to remember. Well done Sheila. — Suzanne
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Thank you so much Suzanne for your kind comments. I love getting feedback from my readers. I’m so happy you stopped by the Cow Pasture and hope you will continue to visit. I look forward to more of our conversations.
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I really enjoyed reading this. I can sense the rawness of the emotion in so few words. Well Done!
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Thank you so much, Lea for your kind comments. I’m glad you enjoyed the piece. I hope you will continue to visit the Cow Pasture and I look forward to more of your feedback. May you and your family have a Merry Christmas.
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