How to Show Anger in Your Characters

hqdefault-2Daily Post Prompt:  Angry

Anger – a strong feeling of annoyance, displeasure, or hostility. Usually consisting of a three-part reaction: negative thoughts, frustration, and acting out (screaming, shaking fist, or violence).

Whether it’s in the form of nasty tweets or highly-charged protests, the media and social networks are rampant with demonstrations of anger.  And, although most people think anger is a negative and counterproductive emotion – it does have benefits worth noting.

Benefits of Anger to Individuals

  1. It motivates us.
  2. Makes us feel more confident.
  3. Acknowledging anger helps lower stress and pain.
  4. Expressing anger rather than bottling it up, benefits interpersonal relationships.
  5. Provides insight if we’re open to looking inward.
  6. Aids negotiations.

In life, anger isn’t always a bad thing. But, how do we use it in writing? Part of making our characters well-rounded and real, is capturing their emotions – including anger. Anger equals conflict and conflicts move the plot forward.

Reasons Characters get Angry:

Just like us, our characters get angry when they feel helpless, confused, frustrated, jealous, embarrassed, or hurt, to name a few.  But, how do we show anger without being melodramatic? First of all, forget the clichés and don’t rely entirely on the actions of the character (remember show don’t tell).

We show anger in the way we speak, the tone of our voice, and body language. Below is a small sample of the ways you can show anger in your characters.MAXINE1131313

Angry Speech:

  • Stammer with rage
  • Taunt
  • Sputter
  • Scream
  • Speak in grudging tones
  • Sarcasm

Angry Tones of Voice:

  • Strained
  • rising an octave
  • Tinged with menace
  • Dripping with Spite
  • Cool, icy
  • Voice shaking

Facial Expressions:

  • Scorching look
  • Eyes narrowing with contempt
  • Withering stare
  • Regard bitterly
  • Warning look
  • Glower
  • Eyes that are cold
  • Nostrils flaring
  • jaw clenching
  • Eyebrows drawing together
  • Reddened face

Other Body Expressions:

  • Clenching fists
  • Stomping
  • Punching, kicking, throwing
  • Body tense
  • Veins visibly pulsing
  • Breathing deeply
  • Muscles quivering
  • Slamming doors, etc.

For more on how to write about anger, check out these resources:

  1. 37 Ways To Write About Anger by Amanda Patterson
  2. Creating Emotional Frustration in Your Characters61zuks2byenl-_sx348_bo1204203200_
  3. Emotional Rollercoaster: Writing Anger by Apryl Duncan
  4. The Emotion Thesaurus: A Writer’s Guide to Character Expression
  5. The Writer’s Digest Sourcebook for Building Believable Characters 1st edition by Marc McCutcheon 51pt853khal-_ac_ul480_sr312480_

Anger is one of those emotions that make us uncomfortable, but it is an essential component of who we are and thus your characters.

How do you show anger in your characters?

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What Is A Hero? (Alternate title: Why Are People Assholes?)

This was such a wonderful post from Dan Alatorre, I simply had to share. An excellent post. If you enjoyed it as much as I did and it moved you, or made you think – give a shout out to Dan.

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head shot 2 Your humble host

Last weekend, I went to the city that is known for being the highest tourist attraction city in the world. We went to two of the world’s most popular theme parks.

I won’t name them because the parks themselves are irrelevant. (One is Magical and the other is Sea themed, okay?)

It’s the people we met at the parks that are relevant.

At the first magical park, we had a blast and were finally leaving, waiting in line for the mass transit system to take us to the parking lots. As you might guess, at the end of a long, hot Florida day, the crowds were thick and the people were tired. We were leaving kinda early because we and our friends wanted an early dinner for our young children. I mention that because it was not 9 PM or 11 PM. This place does not serve…

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Let’s Never Forget : Freedom Isn’t Free

During this unusual and contentious political season, let us pause this holiday weekend and give thanks for those men and women (past and present) who have sacrificed and made it possible for us to enjoy the very freedoms we so often take for granted.

 

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Stories to Share

images-4Once again, I like to share with you some of my favorite short stories. I hope you will like them as much as I did and, if so, pass them on for others to enjoy.

A couple of these are winners in the WOW – Women on Writing Winter 2016 Contest.

1st place goes to Solange Hommel for her story, When You Wake Up.

2nd Place goes to Sara Codair for The Cell.

From No Extra Words Podcast, Episode 38 by Phillip Sterling Improvisation.

Fiction Southeast brings us, Dead Man Dressing by Robert Grindy.

And, from Your Story Club, The Good Neighbor by Dan Leo.

Kick up your feet and enjoy a little summer time reading this holiday weekend and send the authors some appreciation.

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