I’ve tasted the victory of typing the last line on my first full-length novel. The exhilaration of writing “The end” lasted for about a day because now, the real work begins. But, where do I begin?
To find out what my next steps involved, I started where I always do – with research and looking at what the experts had to say.
First, let’s look at a few definitions and terms – Here’s what I discovered:
Revision – means to you take a second look; read it through with fresh and critical perspective.
- includes reviewing and amending the story.
- is not a one-time run through.
- often requires a back and forth between drafts. (I’m told many writers go through multiple drafts and revisions before moving to the next stage.
- it requires a large-scale overview of the story.
- You’re looking for the overall flow and structure of the story.
- looking for holes or loose threads
- organization of the story
- character development
- issues of credibility or believability in the plot, character, or settings.
Rewriting – When you rewrite an entire scene, chapter, or add additional information to expand a scene, delete an unnecessary character, or make a character fuller.
Note: Inline annotations are a good way to make note of areas that may require a rewrite.
Editing and ProofReading – I tend to think these two things go hand in hand.
- Editing involves getting the words right and making sure the sentence flows.
- Proofreading means getting into the nitty-gritty of grammar, spelling, and punctuation; line by line. Things to look for during this process:
- sentence structure and length
- those pesky waste words
- weak verbs
- Remove unnecessary, vague words, clichés, or jargon
- Remove awkward or mixed metaphors
- smooth transitions
- homonyms – words with the pronunciation but different meanings; or, two or more words with the same spelling but different meanings.
Finishing that first draft is exhilarating, but don’t let impatience to see it in print cause you to skimp on the revision process. We all want to see our book on the shelves, but we want a polished book one where our readers get lost in the story and not distracted by poor story organization or sloppy typos.
For More on the Revision Process, check out what this expert has to say.
- Are You Making These 3 Common Revision Mistakes? By Janice Hardy.
- General Strategies Before Your Proofread
- Revising Drafts
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