Day 12: #atozchallenge
What in the world is a logline? A one or two sentence description of what your story is about. Think of it like a five-second sales pitch.
What Does it Do for You? A well-written logline enables you to answer without any hesitation the question, What is your story about?
In addition, it helps you, the author, stay on track and spot problems within the story structure.
Essential elements of a logline:
- The protagonist
- The end goal
- The stakes
These elements are critical to include, but be concise and use phrasing that creates interest and hooks the reader.
Here’s an example from my current work in progress: (Be kind, I’m still toying with it)
When Bostonian Claire Nelson (protagonist) is called home after sixteen years to care for her estranged mother (goal), the secrets of her past reveal a darker betrayal (stakes) and she forced make a choice (goal).
Have you written your logline? To learn more check out: How and Why to Write a Logline for Your Story by Becca Puglisi
I’d love to hear your comments. Talk to me. Tell me your story and look for me on Facebook at SheilaMGood, Pinterest, Bloglovin, Twitter@sheilagood, and Contently.
Never heard of a logline until just now. I always that was like the elevator pitch. They are very hard to come up with . Thanks for the info.
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They are really difficult especially for a Southern girl who has never said anything in one sentence! 🙂
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Ha! I can relate. My husband is from Mississippi . He loves to talk and talk.
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Great example! Log lines are so powerful but not easy to write 😊 I like yours, I think it’s catchy.
Andrea from Music & Words blog
Volunteer in Damyanti’s D Company #atozchallenge
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Miss Andi, thanks so much for your kind comments. I appreciate you commenting on my logline. Glad you found the Cow Pasture and welcome to the fence jumpers.Good luck with the challenge.
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Reblogged this on Don Massenzio's Blog and commented:
Here is a great post on the subject of loglines
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Thank you Don for the reblog. I’m glad you found it helpful and worth sharing. As always, good to see you in the Cow Pasture.
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Thanks. Hopefully I won’t step in anything 🙂
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Not from my end.
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Loved this post!! Thank you. I’d never heard of logline – just a ‘pitch’. Liking logline much better and with your example (brilliant by the way), I’m going to start practising writing them.
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Thank you so much Nicola. Your comments and praise were very kind.Much appreciated. Glad you stopped by and found the info helpful and glad you jumped in to contribute to the conversation.
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My current stories I haven’t worked on log lines, but have for previous stories. Usually, I do log lines then try to condense it more for Twitter.
~Ninja Minion Patricia Lynne aka Patricia Josephine~
Story Dam
Patricia Lynne, Indie Author
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That’s a good idea. Thanks Patricia.
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By Jove, I think you’ve nailed it!
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Really? I wasn’t so sure but thanks!
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These are tough to write! I always have the most difficult time answering the question “What is your story about?” without giving too much away, but wanting to keep in the essentials. I’ve gotten much better at discussing my story in person now than I was last year, and the years before when I was editing, but it’s certainly never easy. Having a logline up front would have been a big help 🙂
Julianne
Ink & Stitches – http://blog.jhwinter.com
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I’m nit very good with them either. I can verbalize my story pretty well, just getting it down in a sentence or two is daunting. Thanks for reading and commenting. It’s a pleasure to read your thoughts.
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Thank you for sharing this. I had no clue about loglines, and how to go about creating one. Have a great challenge!
[@samantha_rjsdr] from
Whimsical Compass
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Hi Samantha (one of my favorite names) for stopping by. I’m glad you found it helpful.
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