Photo Prompt from Rochelle Wisoff-Fields – Addicted to Purple
Jenny muttered a prayer as she ran for her life. Only her footfalls echoing against the tunnel floor interrupted the blessed silence.
Following orders and listening well proved to be her salvation yielding privileges and the secrets to the tunnel underneath the prison. By the time, they discovered her empty cell; she’d be crossing the border.
She could almost hear the guard’s denials of involvement. No one believed her claims of innocence, least of all, her two tormentors; time the assholes got a taste of their own medicine.
Jenny sprinted toward the sliver of light and to freedom.
Her desire for freedom shines through, innocent or not. I have to chuckle, since that mexican drug lord was just reported on the news, with his tunnel. I hope she has nothing to do with him. 😉
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Lol. Believe it or not, I thought of my story when I saw that, too. I’ll let the readers draw their own conclusions. I’m glad you liked and especially glad you stopped by and commented. Thanks.
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I hope she enjoys her freedom. Nicely done. 🙂
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I’m glad you liked the story. Thanks for the comments and for stopping by.
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Wonderful emotional story!
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Thanks. Glad you liked it and glad you stopped by the Cow Pasture.
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Let us be positive and believe that she was innocent! Freedom!
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That’s what I like to think. Thanks for stopping by the Cow Pasture and taking time to comment.
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Intriguing piece.
Well done.
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I’m glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by the Cow Pasture and for taking the time to comment. I love feedback.
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You are very welcome, Sheila, and we all love feedback.
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Agreed. Makes us all better writers.
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More questions than answers! Brilliant!
Rosey Pinkerton’s blog
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Aw, thanks Rosey for your kind comments. I like to write a story that gives the reader the freedom (no pun intended) to decide their own interpretation. So happy you stopped by the Cow Pasture and for taking the time to someone.
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I hope this is political and not criminal, so I can be happy to hope for her.
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I’ll leave that to your imagination, but I’m glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by the Cow Pasture and taking the time to comment. I love feedback.
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I liked this, the ambiguity of innocence (as Rochelle already stated) was well done (I note they were only ever ‘claims of innocence’) 🙂
I do think this sentence is over-punctuated though:
1) By the time, they discovered her empty cell; she’d be crossing the border
seems like it should be
2) By the time they discovered her empty cell she’d be crossing the border.
Cheers
KT
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Thanks for the critique and comments. I admit at times I am a comma whore. LOL I appreciate the feedback and I’m glad you liked the story. Thanks for stopping by the Cow Pasture. I look forward to hearing more from you.
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I, also, love my commas; semicolons too. 🙂
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Dear Sheila,
Everyone in prison is “innocent.” Maybe she truly is. We’ll never know for sure. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Youre correct. I’ll leave it to the readers to decide. Thanks so much for the prompt and visiting the Cow Pasture. I love to receive comments.
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I wonder at how innocent she truly is. Interesting take on the photo.
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Thanks. I hear every one says they’re innocent. I’ll let the reader decide from there. Thanks for commenting.
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Glad she escaped to freedom, well done.
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Thanks for stopping by the Cow Pasture and commenting. I’m glad you liked it.
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Well executed. I like it!
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Thanks! Glad you liked it and I appreciate your comments.
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I hope she makes it.. I hope she is innocent and can find a new life somewhere.
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Thanks for commenting, I’m glad you liked it. Of course fiction is much nicer than the truth and escape, well, we know how that end, at least in real life.
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I wonder what kind of revenge is on the cards now that she’s almost free! 🙂 Nice take on the photo!
Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason
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Thanks for the nice comment. I’m glad you liked it.
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