100 Word Challenge for Grown Ups – Week#165 Prompt: …the suitcase lay open…
Betty picked at her cuticles and stared at the bed. The suitcase lay open waiting for her decision. Yes or No? Fred had been adamant. “No, you’re not going. A woman your age has no business traipsing off to Europe. “I won’t allow it.”
The bucket list she’d written years ago, placed Paris as number one. She wasn’t getting younger, it was now or never.
He won’t allow it?
Fuming, she stomped across the room, jerked open the dresser, grabbed a hand full of underwear, and threw them in the suitcase.
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Love it and also the picture at the end. 😀
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Thank you. So glad you enjoyed it. And I can attest it was the trip of a lifetime!. Thanks for stopping by the Cow Pasture. I’m especially thrilled you have become a fellow fence jumper. I look forward to more conversations.
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I like this woman. Good one!
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Thanks Susan, I’m glad you enjoyed the piece. Thanks for stopping by the Cow Pasture and for taking the time to comment. I love feedback.
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Thrilled you have become a fellow fence jumper. I look forward to many more conversations. Welcome to the Cow Pasture.
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Good for her! And who cares if he gets over it or not, lol! You caught the thought process beautifully, and I just know she’s going to have the time of her life in Paris! Way to go!
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Thank you so much. I think most married women can relate. At least those in my age group. I’m glad I was able to capture those feelings and thrilled you got it. Thanks for commenting and for stopping by the Cow Pasture.
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Like it! and what a wonderful trip it was! 🙂
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Aww! Thanks for commenting and you’re right. What a trip it was!
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Good for her. Live the dream!
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Thank you Laura for your kind comments. I’m so happy you enjoyed the piece and thanks for stopping by the Cow Pasture. I look forward to hearing from you again.
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Feisty! Good for her, she’s right he will get over it!
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Thanks for the great comments. I’m glad you enjoyed the piece and I’m thrilled you have joined us fellow fence jumpers. Welcome to the Cow Pasture. I look forward to more conversations with you.
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Indeed. One way or another, he’ll get over and she deserves to go, darn it! Time to bust out, baby! 😀
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And she did! So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting.
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Really nice.
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Thanks you so much. I’m thrilled you have decided to become a fellow fence jumper and look forward to more conversations. Welcome.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Exactly. Good one and well written.
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Thank you somuch for your kind comments. I’m thrilled you stopped by the Cow Pasture and look forward to hearing more from you.
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Great one! Made me smile.
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